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作文一
My happy weekend
I am going to do many things and be very busy on the weekend. So I do my homework on Saturday morning. In the afternoon, I am going to do housework with my mother. Because I am a good girl, I am helpful at home. On Sunday morning, I am going to visit my grandparents with my parents. In the afternoon, we are going to the park together. Because there is a kite show. And my grandparents likes making kites. I think, we can see many beautiful kites there. And we are going to buy some beautiful kites, too. Then, we are going to fly the new kites, that’s fun. In the evening, we are going to have a big dinner. We are going to have fish for dinner. Because my grandparents likes eating fish. And my grandma cooks fish well. After dinner, we are going to watch TV together. We are going to be very happy.
This is my happy weekend. I like my weekend very much. What about your weekend? Can you tell me?
作文二
My happy weekend
Last weekend ,I didn’t want to do homework all day .I wanted to go to somewhere.That was fun.I went to the zoo with my friend .I bought two tickets .One is for him ,the other is for me .Then we took a bus to the zoo .
The zoo is very big .There are many kinds of animals at the zoo.What animal did we see.We saw tiger 、momkey 、panada、lion 、elephant、and so on .I like monkey and panada best .Because momkey and panada are pretty and they can make me happy .I didn’t feed any animals .Because I don’t what kind of animals eat to make strong and I didn’t eat any snacks .I wanted to keep the zoo clean .Finally ,we feel tired and we leave the zoo.I think the zoo is good for animals ,why?Because the zoo can help people to stop animals from going extinct.and I think zoos are bad for animals.Because the zoo make animals feel lonely and animals will misses they family.
That was a ggod day !