2016強(qiáng)化考研英語作文的高級(jí)模板
導(dǎo)語：好吹的，在喋喋不休的編造與炫耀中消磨;好學(xué)的，在知識(shí)的礦藏里默默無聲的挖掘。下面是小編為是大家整理的，英語作文模板。希望對(duì)大家有所幫,歡迎閱讀，僅供參考，更多相關(guān)的知識(shí)，請(qǐng)關(guān)注CNFLA學(xué)習(xí)網(wǎng)!
1、是否長(zhǎng)短句交叉;
2、用詞是否恰當(dāng)，準(zhǔn)確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞;
3、關(guān)鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復(fù)詞;
下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項(xiàng)：
1.適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)代替主動(dòng)，這樣能更客觀的反映事實(shí), 句子開頭不要總是用we / I (比如寫結(jié)尾時(shí)不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. )舉個(gè)經(jīng)典結(jié)尾It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus， its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.
2.善于使用插入語，比如說把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語放在中間，一般放在主語、動(dòng)詞或者助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。
如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間，一般放在動(dòng)詞，助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。
比如說： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that „
3. 一定要學(xué)會(huì)換詞，換形象，具體的代替太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)good, bad , many, thing, think,
people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable代替proper, approaches代替ways, implement代替carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge代替enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力)
下面舉一篇例子，給各位鉆石班會(huì)員共勉!
Computer and I By Simmy
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
exceedingly 替換 very
thrilling 替換 exciting
sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb. be interested in sth. google 替換 search
an army of 替換 a lot of
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the
current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個(gè)精彩句型，用來描述在某個(gè)時(shí)期發(fā)生了什么事情;
Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular
Coincident with „ 非常地道的詞匯，表達(dá)“與„一致”的意思，替換 With „ Advancement 替換 development
Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替換 enter into
Current ( currently )替換 now
Appeal to sb. 替換 sb. be interested in sth.
Growing individuals 替換 more and more people
It is no exaggeration to say 經(jīng)典句型， 說某事是毫不夸張的
For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.
For a start 替換 To begin with
We can, freely, search 用了插入語的寫作手法
our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被動(dòng)
Additionally 替換 In addition / Besides
Deliver 替換 send
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 這個(gè)句子有三個(gè)精彩之處，首先There is no denying that這個(gè)句型，還有however作為插入語， function in the disservice of 替換 do harm to
Emerging 代替 appearing ( fading 代替 disappearing )
Net citizen 網(wǎng)民，屬于精彩用詞
As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet. No garden has no weeds 替換 Every coin has two sides
Computers do play ，do 強(qiáng)調(diào)
Positive 替換 important / good 等
A slice of 替換 a part of
Unfavorable 替換 bad
Impacts 替換 effects / influences
We should, therefore, take advantage of „ 使用插入語
Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象， merits/ virtues) 替換 advantage ( defects 替換 disadvantage )
Facet 替換 aspect
各位，上面的作文里有這么多精彩的閃光點(diǎn)，作文怎么會(huì)不得高分呢!
以下是我當(dāng)年總結(jié)的30個(gè)最經(jīng)典的替換詞，請(qǐng)各位一定要把下面的我總結(jié)的這些背下來!!
1.individuals,characters, folks代替(people ,persons)
2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising
(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding代替good
3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse(有害的)代替bad
如果bad做表語，可以有be less impressive代替
eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.
4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,many,if not most)代替many. 注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有詞。
Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that„.同理 用most, if not all ,代替most.
5: a slice of, quiet a few , several代替some
6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that,
hold the view that, it is widely shared that,
it is universally acknowledged that)替think
(因?yàn)槭菚嬲Z，所以要加that)
7:affair ,business ,matter 代替thing
8: shared 代 common
9.reap huge fruits 代替get much benefit )
10:for my part ,from my own perspective 代替 in my opinion
11:Increasing(ly),growing 代替more and more( 注意沒有g(shù)rowingly這種形式。所以當(dāng)修飾名詞時(shí)用increasing/growing.修飾形容詞，副詞用increasingly.
Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.
Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.
12.little if anything, 或little or nothing代替hardly
13..benefitial rewarding代替helpful be beneficial of
14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 代替customer
15.exceedingly,extremely 代替very
16.hardly unnecessary, hardly inevitable ... 代替 necessary,
inevitable
17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 代替sb take interest in
18.capture one's attention代替attract one's attention.
19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect
20.be indicative of ,be suggesteive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear
21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 代替cause.
22. There are several reasons behind sth 代替..reasons for sth
23.desire 代替want.
24.pour attention into 代替pay attention to
25.bear in mind that 代替remember
26. enjoy, possess 代替have(注意process是過程的意思)
27. interaction代替communication
28.frown on sth代替 be against , disagree with sth
29.to name only a few, as an example代替 for example
30. next to/virtually impossible,代替nearly impossible
What these two drawings above illustrate is a little flower,under the protection of the greenhouse,is in full bloom / Flourishing no matter how terrible the weather would be like, Of course, the opposite side of this phenomenon also exists.the beautiful flower is no longer growing in favorable condition.In no time will the flower die,if it can not adapt to the new circumstance.
Obviously, the cartoons intend to reveal the phenomenon-the youth lack of independence-which widely exists in our society.It is not uncommon that we graduates,when leave campus for position,have a sense of unfamiliarity and dissatisfactory,moreover escape from the cut-throat competition of job market or low-income, high strength work.Currently, young adults of our generation who are brought up without sadness and sorrow.Parents,all the time,drive their best efforts to meet the unreasonable requirement made by their only child.When we enter into school with the guidance of our teachers,we seldom independently copy with difficulties we have ever confronted.
Therefore, When it comes to what impacts it would bring, in my eyes,,it is high time that youngsters come to realize their own shortcomings before they completely prepares to hunt for work.In addition,our society and school should provide support and advice for them so that these green hands can adjust themselves to the multivariant environment in the coming future/ in the near future/ in the not far distant future 。(不遠(yuǎn)的將來)
1、 一定要多變化，比如通篇不要全部用the youth，替換詞很多，比
如the young people ; youngsters ; the youth ; young adults
2、 在一些名詞或者動(dòng)詞前面可以擴(kuò)展下，加上形容詞或者副詞，第一
能增加字?jǐn)?shù)，第二能使得句子更加形象生動(dòng)，比如你文中的meet
the requirement，可以改成meet the unreasonable requirement
3、 to seek for a job，這里“找工作”的表達(dá)很多，比如apply for a job，hunt for work 。而“求職者”地道的表達(dá)多用 job hunter ，job seeker等。再發(fā)散下，解聘怎么表達(dá)??dismiss an
散，聯(lián)想。
4、 ,it is high time that 。。。。。，這個(gè)句型大家也可以用用，但是注
意后面要跟 動(dòng)詞原形do
5、 in the coming future/ in the near future/
in the not far distant future 。(不遠(yuǎn)的將來)這個(gè)用法務(wù)必掌握!!一般用在作文的結(jié)尾句最后。
6 drawings、cartoons、pictures、 注意幾個(gè)替換 7 When it comes to what impacts it would bring, in my eyes, it is high time that。。。、注意這個(gè)句型，非常地道! 8 drive their best efforts to do / try one's utmost to do/ do one's best endeavors 盡最大努力做某事 9 In addition,或者用additionally
【強(qiáng)化考研英語作文的高級(jí)】相關(guān)文章：
考研英語作文03-16
滑雪考研英語作文10-29
考研英語看圖作文03-30
中考英語作文高級(jí)詞匯08-13
高考英語作文的高級(jí)句型04-25
高考英語作文高級(jí)詞匯11-27
烏來瀑布考研英語作文10-28
環(huán)保問題考研英語作文10-28
各類演講考研英語作文10-28
夢(mèng)幻花考研英語作文10-29