2016雅思寫作語料庫：網絡交易的影響
科技類：
Nowadays, people perform their everyday tasks, such as banking, shopping as well as business transactions, without the need of meeting other people face to face. What are the possible effects of the phenomenon on the individual and the society as a whole? 現在很多人可以通過網絡做很多事情，例如購物和交易，這對于個人和社會的影響是什么?
點評：本文按照題目指令寫作，只需談及網絡交易對于個人和社會的利弊影響，無需重點提出解決策略，可選擇在尾段簡單提及。
作家立場：本文將會分析網絡交易對于個人和社會的影響。
思路拓展：
網絡購物對于個人影響：
1. 利好的方面：給人們的購物帶來了便利，具體而言，網絡購物可克服地理的障礙，節省了大量的時間，同時，網絡購物價格低廉，選擇豐富。
2. 不利的方面：對于女性消費者而言，因為網絡商品價格低廉，所以，很多人在打折期間囤積商品，這樣，慣性消費反而會增加經濟負擔。
網絡購物對于社會影響：
1. 利好的方面：網絡交易平臺的出現在一定程度解決了就業，很多年輕人可以開網店賺錢，這種工作方式時間靈活，
2. 不利的方面：網絡商品質量沒有保障，消費者容易買到假貨，經濟受損。新形態的網絡犯罪成為社會問題，例如，網絡購物過程中，很多不法分子傳播病毒，竊取密碼，侵犯隱私，非法牟利。
雅思寫作語料庫：
1. The invention and popularity of the computer has profoundly revolutionized modern people’s option of consumption 互計算機的發明和普及深刻地改變了人們的購物選擇。
解析：revolutionize v極大改變
2. On-line shopping has been boosting like the mushrooms after spring rains. 網絡購物就像是雨后春筍般不斷地增長。
3. People have been debating the pros of cons of cyber business transaction without reaching any definite agreement. 人們在思考網絡交易的利弊，沒有達成共識。
4. In this essay，I will endeavor to examine the impacts brought about by this on-line business traction both on individual consumers and the society. 本文中，我將努力探究下網絡交易帶來的個人和社會影響。
解析：endeavor to do sth v 努力做……
5. The merits of on-line shopping and on-line business prevail over its possible demerits. 網絡購物和網絡交易的利大于弊。
解析：prevail over v 遠遠超過
6. In comparison with the traditional shopping, the cyber shopping enjoys its unique advantages , which quite fit the young consumers’ taste. It is no necessary for consumers to take trouble to go outside, just click their mouse, the goods will be delivered to them. 和傳統的購物相比，網絡購物有其獨特的優勢，這更符合年輕消費者的口味。消費者不需要外出，只需點擊一下鼠標，商品就會送到他們手中。
7. Many youngsters like to spend their hardly earned money on their favorite goods 許多年輕人喜歡把辛苦賺到的錢花在他們喜歡的商品上。
8. Problems, however, inevitably ensue 然而，問題隨之而來。
解析：ensue v跟著發生
9. Excessive on-line consumption will impose much pressure upon some unwise consumers economically. 過度的網絡消費對于非理性消費者施加了經濟壓力。
10. Some young ladies are addicted to cyber consumption out of the reason of seizing the opportunities of discount 出于抓住打折的機會的目的，很多年前女孩網絡購物上癮。
11. Even worse，on-line consumption fraud has been agonizing many on-line shoppers 更加糟糕的是，在線的消費欺詐行為正在困擾很多在線買家。
解析：agonize v使痛苦
12. It is highly possible that consumers might be fooled into buying fake or illegal products. 消費者很有可能被欺騙購買虛假的非法的商品。
13. Many on-line advertisements are full of flowery phrases and empty promises 很多的在線廣告充滿了花哨的宣傳語以及空洞的承諾。
14. Some law-breakers draw on the Internet to deliver the bait or disseminate virus in order to steal the password and reap fabulous profits illegally.一些不法分子利用互聯網發送誘餌，傳播病毒，竊取密碼，非法牟利。
解析：draw on the Internet v利用互聯網
解析：reap fabulous profits illegally v非法牟利
15. On-line business transaction is a two-edged weapon which can be used equally for good or evil. 網絡交易是一把雙刃刀，有利有弊。
16. What is of the utmost importance is to make use of its merits and be careful about its demerits. 重要的是，我們要利用其利好及當心其弊端。
17. It is the duty of every consumer to raise the awareness of wise buying. 消費者應該提高理性消費意識。
18. The government should be urged to strengthen the censorship of on-line advertisement and severely penalize those illegal sellers. 政府應該被督促去加強對于網絡廣告的審查，處罰非法賣家。
解析：The government should be urged to do sth 政府應該被督促去做……
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